Tuesday, September 25, 2007

Australia

If I could have the vacation of my dreams in some place in the world, I think I would travel to Australia. I would choose this country because my father said to me that he loved when he went there. He visited it and told me that Australia is a very polite country and all people are friendly and happy. He want to live there for 3 months but my mother don't want to move.

I would go there in the end of the year because is when school is over. To get there, I would travel by plane with my father, my sister and some friends, We are going to stay in Sydney because is the biggest city of Australia. I think I would like it. Will be the first vacation with my friends in a special place.

I have heard that Sydney is a good and famous city to visit because we have so many thinks to do and wonderful places to go. By the side of the bay we can find a beautiful and modern Sydney Opera House and we can go to the beaches. I also saw in the discovery channel photos about the beaches os Australia. There the water is very very very clean and we can see dolphins and all kind of fishs. The weather is hot so we can use short and t-shirts all the day.

In my first day I will spend my morning sleeping, my afternoon swimming and my evening in some local to see nice and yung people to dance all night with my friends. Australia will be like a wonderland, my wonderland. If I have some day a chance to go there I will have fun !!!

written by Melissa

5 comments:

Ronaldo Lima, Jr. said...

Hey, that's my dream vacation destination too!!!
So, you are not going to move to Australia anymore?
=(

Marcus said...

Hey , Melissa...
I loved your compositon...
I'm so proud of ya...
But you should overdo the linking words...

Kisses,

Yours Marcus

Wagner and Yuri said...

We would like to visit Australia too,because it is beautiful contry with friendly people.


Congratulations!The composition was great, but it would be better if you use more linking words and if you say what you would do as soon you get there.

Camila said...

You are a terrific writer! Just have to improve little things.
Well done!

Melissa said...

Hi teacher I really don't now if I will move for three mounths there but I want to go there ^^