If I could have the vacation of my dreams anywhere in the world, I think I would travel to some island at pacific like Tahiti. I would choose this place because it is a paradisiacal place with beautiful beaches and a lot of sun. I would travel on summer because it would be better to enjoy it.
To get there, I think I would travel by plane because it's farway from Brazil. I would take my best friends with me and my family too because in a beautiful place like this you have to enjoy with the people that you like.
I have heard that Tahiti is hot for all year so I would take just t-shirts, skirts, dresses and bikinis. The water there is transparent just like in Fernando de Noranha. See the sunset in pacific, because it’ s very beautiful and in Brazil it’s impossible because here the coast is bathed by altantic ocean.
As soon as I get there I would talk to the people who live there.During the morning I would go to the beach and enjoy the exotic nature and wait for the sunset, I would invite my friends to make a luau, and I would drink exotic cocktails. It would be perfect.
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written by Júlia
5 comments:
Tahiti sounds like a great place to spend summer vacation!
Wow, Tahiti must be really exciting. I would also love to go there. It's believed to have the most beautiful beaches in the world.
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Yours , Marcus
Júlia...
Your place of your dream vacation is very interisting, Tahiti looks like one good place to get fun.
About you had write we have some ideas to your composition get better, we think you could write about what you would do there in the third paragraph. And you are ristrict about spending days there, so you could write about afternoons and nights too.
But is only this, good job!
Kisses!
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