Sunday, September 23, 2007

Disney

I dream to go to many places around the world, but one that I would certainly go is Disney. I’ve always dreamed of going there because of the parks and the magic of Disney world. If I could choose a time of year to go, it would be at the end of the year, like December, because at this time of year it's colder there, and I love cold places. Another reason is because I would like to spend New Year's there.
To get there I would go by plane, it’s one of the best ways to get there and I love flying. I would go with my family and some friends. I’ve always traveled with my family and I like it very much, it makes me more comfortable, and I would take some friends to make the fun bigger.
If I went there at the end of the year, I would take some warm clothes, but not so much, I would buy more clothes there because some are cheaper. As soon as I got there, I would take many pictures and start to see the stores and buy some things. I think when you’re traveling you don’t have much time to breathe, so I would do many things when I got there, as I would do while I’m there.
Well, I would spend all my days going to the parks, riding rollercoasters, buying things, taking pictures, I would just stop to sleep a few hours. If I could go to Disney, I would have to take a vacation for the vacation.

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3 comments:

Ronaldo Lima, Jr. said...

I have been to Disney 10 years ago, and I LOVED it, I would like to go again because I know there are many more attractions nowadays!

Isabela said...

I went there with my family three years ago and we all loved it very much, but what we really really liked was Bush Gardens because the four of us -my husband, my two daughters and I- love roller coasters!

Pedro said...

I have never been to Disney but I would like to go there because there must be very exciting. To improve your composition, I think you should use more linking words, but in terms of organization it is very complete!